@CCMorgan *blushes furiously* Thank You so much!
I really loved writing this! Like you, as I was writing it I was transported to that place and time and I was living in that moment smelling the myriad of scents around me and getting lost in the sweet sounds. At times I was overwhelmed with emotion and had to stop. I did not want a sad tale and yet I knew it would not exactly be one of happiness. Yet happiness can be found!
It allows the reader to assume much should they so desire and it poses more questions than it answers. I may go back to this sometime and attempt to fill in some holes in the wall.
I really loved writing this! Like you, as I was writing it I was transported to that place and time and I was living in that moment smelling the myriad of scents around me and getting lost in the sweet sounds. At times I was overwhelmed with emotion and had to stop. I did not want a sad tale and yet I knew it would not exactly be one of happiness. Yet happiness can be found!
It allows the reader to assume much should they so desire and it poses more questions than it answers. I may go back to this sometime and attempt to fill in some holes in the wall.
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@Vivaci Thank You. You are too kind to me!
What I find interesting upon reading it is that we do not know the distance, in time, of them being apart. As you may know when we care deeply for another the laspe of a month can seem like a year-and a year can seem like a lifetime ago.
And then there is that "distance" that was in their look. And I have to wonder, even AS the author, what transpired in her mind , in that 5-7 minute dance, that caused her to act as she did after it was over..... I am sure it was not pity but perhaps a longing of the heart?
What I find interesting upon reading it is that we do not know the distance, in time, of them being apart. As you may know when we care deeply for another the laspe of a month can seem like a year-and a year can seem like a lifetime ago.
And then there is that "distance" that was in their look. And I have to wonder, even AS the author, what transpired in her mind , in that 5-7 minute dance, that caused her to act as she did after it was over..... I am sure it was not pity but perhaps a longing of the heart?
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@marsbar This is a bit what I was after. Although not quite the Belle Epoque era of the 1890's or even the Nouveau Chic of the Roaring 20's but somewhere in between- I wanted the flair of high society to be there yet I also wanted it relatable on a much more basic level.
It IS a tale of Endearment!
It IS a tale of Endearment!
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