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I Don't Believe In Happy Endings



Teaching

Do you really think you could teach me?
About hope and kindness and truth
Across the treacherous ocean you’d reach me?
But I’m a rock that seeks only recluse

I wonder if my lands were ever touched
By the washed up and washed away
Or Empire seekers wanting too much
They came, and conquered but did not stay

Do you think my land is worthy?
It’s muddied and dirty and grey
My trees have promised tightly to hold me
As your oceans try pull me away

What becomes of me if I let go?
Of all that I had to break my bones to defend
What is waiting beyond what I refuse to know?
Do you really believe it could be my happy end

You thrash against my heavy wall
Then rush back taking part of me with you
My foundations are weak as I stumble and fall
But your ocean has left as my breath bids adieu

What new lesson is it too late to learn?
Set me on fire, walk away, watch me burn.



Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
I could read as a person or as a truly virgin shore or land. Both bring the sound plaintive wailing and gnashing of teeth over what was lost in an opportunity passed or past as the case may be.
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Wailing and gnashing teeth. Oh that makes me feel very dramatic! Well maybe the wailing is quite fitting for the devastation caused by loss of hope which is replaced by waves of fear and empty longing?
Thanks as always for reading my work 🤗@Sorrowfulgaze
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
@MayaHope Dramatic is a good thing for writing. ;) Longing and fear can motivate us or paralyze us. Its all how we choose to view it. As always my pleasure.
samanthasmokes · 36-40, F
Please ... before you get so involved with this mood and make like Virginia Woolf and put rocks in your coat pocket while going for a swim ... get some help!!
MayaHope · 41-45, F
That make me smile, it’s only a poem. It’s better than therapy!!@samanthasmokes
That is very deep.
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Like the abyss 💜@MamaButterfly
@MayaHope yes exactly 💜
Ishtar · 22-25, F
The last line, the best.
MayaHope · 41-45, F
I think I do too. Thanks 💜@Ishtar

 
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