dulcedona · 70-79, F
Estas letras son tan hermosas; están llenos de sentimientos preciosos.
Peaches · F
Sounds like a long lost love who over dosed on heroin. I know because that's what happened to my brother. He had a monkey on his back too and the monkey won. 🥀 You write well my friend, so bittersweet.💔💫💉⚰
bookerdana · M
Starts out like Jim Croche,than takes a walk on the dark side,complete with the Morrison allusion...
I really liked this any plans to add music,Chavez?
I really liked this any plans to add music,Chavez?
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bookerdana · M
@puck61 I hope its repatriated soon,I'd love to hear it in full stereo..mono even!
@bookerdana Last night Apryle said she would help me get it out, but I haven't heard from her since. I wouldn't mind, but I'm not gonna push the issue,
bookerdana · M
Hope that happens in what RC call Ordinary time!

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I know this has got a serious message but what strikes me most is just that it is really good
Extra points for the Jim Morrison reference ❤️
Extra points for the Jim Morrison reference ❤️
Thank you. It was a hip shot after a writing prompt from a friend. "A song about a friendship that turned into love" it doesn't exactly follow the prompt, but this is what came.
berangere · 80-89, F
Moving lyrics.
Amazing. I also liked your song 'alcoholic'
@mysteryespresso Of shoes - and ships - and sealing wax - Of cabbages - and kings- And why the sea is boiling hot - And whether pigs have wings."
@puck61 i do not understand
@mysteryespresso Too bad.
Proudtobfrmwv · F
Very good,,,you should try to sell to a recording studio.
silentwriter180 · 56-60, F
I love this!
@silentwriter180 Thank you! I appreciate that sentiment!

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Beautiful
faithhopelovealways · 56-60, F
I am sorry for your loss...a pain that never goes away!!😥
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@SevenYearAche That one doesn't actually have music yet, It might be something close to "My Back Pages" by Bob, but done better by the Byrds!
*funny thing! You could back track "My Back Pages" and it would fit perfect! I won't do it, of course, That's not my style!
*funny thing! You could back track "My Back Pages" and it would fit perfect! I won't do it, of course, That's not my style!
Velvety · F
I like this...for the message it has. 😊
Carazaa · F
Thanks, you are very talented!

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I can picture Mj singing and dancing to this
Platoscave · F
Impressive!
NeuroticByNature · 41-45, F
Wow
Egg01 · 56-60, F
Lovely words :)
daydeeo · 61-69, M
Good job, Puck.
berangere · 80-89, F
And that fuzzy warmth that turned out so bad
Was an intravenous lie.
So well put!
Was an intravenous lie.
So well put!
😞
Angeleyez · 51-55, F
😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

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that's one sorry example of a shitty capitalist song.