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I Write Songs

You took the hand of an angry man
and calmed him with your eyes.
You wiped the blood from my trembling hands,
and made me realize

There's more to life than right and wrong
there's more to life than pain.
so I had to write just one more song
cause that memory is back again.

I remember the sound that your boots made
on those San Francisco streets,
We could hear you coming a mile away,
I'd smile when I'd hear that beat!

You took me for those midnight walks,
and sometimes I was scared,
by the mystery and the way you talked
in the moments that we shared.

Your medium was black ink
an artist through and through
It's hard for me to stop and think
of everything that was you.

You had a special love for Jim,
and you kept his autograph
I loved the way you quoted him
and I think back and laugh.

"Death makes angels of us all"
I hope the man was right.
but I had no clue, about your fall
on that San Francisco night.

You plied your trade so very well
and your arms were always clean,
I guess I didn't really know you that well
It was just a crazy dream

My black ink girl with noisy boots
had a monkey on her back.
and the visions that you'd substitute
for what the real life lacked

Donya won't you walk with me
on one more midnight stroll?
I have to respect your insincerity
but it finally took its toll.

I no longer hear those noisy boots
in the acid sidewalk air,
alone and scared and destitute
but Donya you're not there.

The years and laughs we never had
will haunt me till I die,
and that fuzzy warmth that turned out so bad
was an intravenous lie.
Peaches · F
Sounds like a long lost love who over dosed on heroin. I know because that's what happened to my brother. He had a monkey on his back too and the monkey won. 🥀 You write well my friend, so bittersweet.💔💫💉⚰
@Peaches Thank you Peaches.
bookerdana · M
Starts out like Jim Croche,than takes a walk on the dark side,complete with the Morrison allusion...
I really liked this any plans to add music,Chavez?
bookerdana · M
@puck61 I hope its repatriated soon,I'd love to hear it in full stereo..mono even!
@bookerdana Last night Apryle said she would help me get it out, but I haven't heard from her since. I wouldn't mind, but I'm not gonna push the issue,
bookerdana · M
Hope that happens in what RC call Ordinary time!
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I know this has got a serious message but what strikes me most is just that it is really good

Extra points for the Jim Morrison reference ❤️
Thank you. It was a hip shot after a writing prompt from a friend. "A song about a friendship that turned into love" it doesn't exactly follow the prompt, but this is what came.
@berangere Yes. She overdosed on black tar heroin in 1986. Very unpredictable stuff. The same dosage can either disappoint you or kill you. It's called "Chiva".
berangere · 80-89, F
@puck61 How tragic! It is sad that some people are so unhappy they have to "escape" through the use of drugs or alcohol and it is tragic that drugs have become so available and there is nothing we can do about it.
@berangere I've written a few songs about that particular thing. It's a healthy pressure valve I guess.
Amazing. I also liked your song 'alcoholic'
@mysteryespresso Of shoes - and ships - and sealing wax - Of cabbages - and kings- And why the sea is boiling hot - And whether pigs have wings."
@puck61 i do not understand
@mysteryespresso Too bad.
berangere · 80-89, F
Moving lyrics.
Very good,,,you should try to sell to a recording studio.
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
I love this!
@silentwriter180 Thank you! I appreciate that sentiment!
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that's one sorry example of a shitty capitalist song.
daydeeo · 61-69, M
@Peaches because the guy's a moron, obviuosly.
@daydeeo He's just doing his part for Marxism. I thought it was funny!
Peaches · F
@daydeeo I blocked him, I'm so tired of the shitty rude ass people around here! 😠Ya gotta really "shake the rugs" to find the truly nice ones.😊⭐
dulcedona · 70-79, F
Estas letras son tan hermosas; están llenos de sentimientos preciosos.
@dulcedona Muchas gracias. Espero que todo via estas aqui en Similar Worlds.
dulcedona · 70-79, F
@puck61 aquí estoy
berangere · 80-89, F
And that fuzzy warmth that turned out so bad
Was an intravenous lie.
So well put!
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@SevenYearAche That one doesn't actually have music yet, It might be something close to "My Back Pages" by Bob, but done better by the Byrds!

*funny thing! You could back track "My Back Pages" and it would fit perfect! I won't do it, of course, That's not my style!
faith2hope4love · 56-60, F
I am sorry for your loss...a pain that never goes away!!😥
Velvety · F
I like this...for the message it has. 😊
@Velvety Thank you!
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I can picture Mj singing and dancing to this
Carazaa · F
Thanks, you are very talented!
daydeeo · 61-69, M
Good job, Puck.
Platoscave · F
Impressive!
Egg01 · 56-60, F
Lovely words :)
Angeleyez · 51-55, F
😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
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SevIsPamprinYouAlways · 56-60, F
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