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The clay walls bleed mercury in the pit of defiance.
JohnnySpot
56-60, M
11 replies 13 views Sep 17, 2017
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BootyCutie · 22-25, F
I like how you depicted clay walls bleeding with defiance. Clay walls were used in ancient times to fortress a city. Like the walls of Jericho.

Good Job. ❤
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JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
A magnificent blur of meaning devouring any and all indifference.
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BootyCutie · 22-25, F
Right; a blur in communication; possible by mass media and religious beliefs, devour the unification of our planet:

We can't stay unmoved, impassive,to their powerful force.

"No divisions among men; are as unbridgeable as the chasm between the faithful and those they call infidels."

Great job. ❤
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JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
Being aware of hand down error and or lifting virtue.
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SkunkyLover · M
I think your story is pretty bad so don't write. There. I did my 10 word story. Or 10 word Comment
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JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
I shot a skunk in the head ten minutes ago.
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Travelbug · 56-60, F
Its very strange
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JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
A faint whisk of the rumor has shaken the dynasty.
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