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[/b][b]There’s a small square box
I keep keys from locks
From out of my past
Where things didn’t last
They fit a locked door
That I opened before
Each one there within
Lying dormant in tin
Keeps a life and a love
I’m no longer part of
So as I glance inside my past life's portal
With my mortal soul, I become immortal.[/b]
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
I love how this story of redemption seems to move beyond that and become something more. Be it reincarnation or moving beyond this mortal coil the final line gives this poem a whole different twist. Bravo!

 
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