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I Write Poetry

You're an apparition.

You feel so near and distant, close and far away.

Your touch is cold, yet a vague warmth lingers.

Traces of your voice echoes inside my head - fleeting.

You haunt me at night,

When I can nearly feel you on my fingers.

Into myself, I keep on running - retreating.

You're that apparition now,

Because you chose not to stay.

How can I love a ghost?

Simple - It was always you that knew me the most.

I thought you'd light my way,

Yet the void you left is a chasm only I can fill.

Despite myself, I let go and pull away.

But I fear part of me will always love you still.

You're my apparition.
SW-User
Oh wow..another treasured friend I have found with a gift for writing. This is amazing and so relatable!!
SW-User
@GeistInTheMachine You are very welcome..love is trouble. I don't simply like it..love it!
SW-User
@DarkHeaven Better than "good"
@SW-User 😉
SW-User
The depth of your love shines through the simplicity of your words.
You have a talent.
SW-User
@GeistInTheMachine you are right. We cannot make anyone feel something. Or appreciate something.

I really believe you should turn your emotions into poems. It helps to put them down on paper so to speak and also, you have a talent. And what better inspiration than pain?
GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@SW-User I've been thinking along the same line. I have a number of ideas I've jotted down. One for a short story as well.

This poem started out as just several lines I wrote while I was in the shower, thinking too much as per usual. Haha.
SW-User
@GeistInTheMachine Lol. A lot of my great thoughts come to me in the shower. There has to be a reason behind that. But I digress.
I look forward to seeing what you come up with.
Kay.
GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@KayraJordyn It's all good.
@GeistInTheMachine We talked already. She's not mad at me. 😊
That’s really good
GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@DarkHeaven I'm glad you like it.
@GeistInTheMachine I did. Thank you.
SW-User
Buenos Dias amigo. I relate to this all too well and I’m so sorry. But this is badass and beautifully expressed. I like it. :)
GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@SW-User Morning. Thank you so much. I've been intending to write more stuff, but I've been drained for these past weeks.

I'm sorry you can relate. It's quite painful. I think the best thing to do is distract ourselves and keep going.
SW-User
@GeistInTheMachine You are very welcome. Yes you’re right . Your brilliance is worth far more than an apparition my friend. Sending light to your heart . Feel the sun and the warmth and realize how brilliant and kind and wonderful you are :) 🤗
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GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@LittleEvilOne It's unfortunate that you can relate, but thank you.
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GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@LittleEvilOne Absolutely. I believe that is often the case.
SW-User
Nice writing 👏🏼
GeistInTheMachine · 31-35, M
@SW-User Thank you.

 
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