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I Write Poetry

The curtain parted
And she caught her image in the mirror
And saw pain, scars, humiliation
And a canyon within her soul so deep and dark
That even the sun shied away
And deflected it's rays elsewhere.

She choked on the image
And turned in disgust
Only to see her friend
Smiling beatifically with love and laughter,
The eyes screaming, "Beautiful!!!"

But she believed the mirror,
Believed the darkness,
Sank into the canyon,
And buried herself there.

When life and love and happiness lay
In the mirrors of her friend's soul.
SapphicHeartF
I told you before, your ways with words is amazing. Keep writing Nat, it's such a gift. Thank you for sharing your gift with the rest of us. Even in our innermost dark moments we should trust and reach out for those eyes of our friends telling us a different story than we see ourselves. Beautiful!
Nat15F
@SapphicHeart Always 馃
SapphicHeartF
@Nat15 馃
Nat15F
@SapphicHeart 馃
OzDiver61-69, M
So very powerful. 馃槬
Nat15F
@OzDiver Thank you :)
sarabee199526-30, F
Nat15F
@sarabee1995 Thank you 馃
Carver31-35, F
Great poem, sweetie. Feels so familiar, that feeling... 馃槬
Nat15F
@Carver I think we've all been there sometime...when we see nothing but gloom in ourselves but others see our inner beauty, tho we refuse to believe them.
Carver31-35, F
@Nat15 Yeah, that's true. 馃槥 You have such a way with words, Nat. 馃
Nat15F
@Carver Thank you, beautiful. I try 馃
AngelPassion26-30, F
I had to read it a few times, that was wonderful! Btw Sarabee told me that you're awesome. I can see that now!
Nat15F
@Carver You're wrong, of course. You're amazing! :*
Nat15F
@AngelPassion she is.
AngelPassion26-30, F
@Nat15 I believe she is!
Tragic. I have felt this pain too. 馃枻
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