I Wrote a Song

This is the very first song that I have ever written, it's a true story of living with schizoaffective disorder and being a Christian, It's called Hallelujah...................................here she goes......

Harsh times I am tense and emotional
while I hide it by remaining quiet
he speaks with lewd questions and comments
but Lord I know you'll lift me up in time

Cause I can hear the angels singing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah
And in the midst of pain I'll sing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah

Rough nights we all know I can feel it,
the evil spirits that attack my life
I've cried for my reputations shattered
but Lord I know you'll help me out this time

Cause I can hear the angels singing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah
And in the midst of pain I'll sing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah
Cause I can hear the angels singing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah
And in the midst of pain I will sing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah

Tough times I can feel the stigmata
false prophets spreading half truths and lies
the wolf strikes and the sheep are all scattered
But Lord I know you're standing by my side.

Cause I can hear the angels singing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah
And in the midst of pain I'll sing Hallelujah
Hallelujah Hallelujah.

Soo! What do you think????

Song written by me, saintsong

InvaderNice · 26-30, M

That's awesome! I'm a musician, singer and lyracisf and I can tell you that that qualifies as a good piece. :)

saintsong · 41-45, F

Awe thanks, it's my first song ever, I've tried writing songs in the past, they all ended up into a crumpled ball of paper, this one I liked, it's my first completed song. And it tells a true story.

Pfuzylogic · M

I love songs of Christian Praise.
It is very uplifting and I could easily see your Spirit lifted by this new song! 😇