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I Wrote a Song

So I just finished my first song I always start them but never finished till today my first FINISHED song is called set free does anyone want to see it/ hear it
Bellylover420 · 31-35, M
I'd love to hear it.
animeloverrulez97 · 26-30, F
Bellylover420 · 31-35, M
@animeloverrulez97 if your interested you can find my music on soundcloud.com my name is choppa da lyricoligist.
animeloverrulez97 · 26-30, F
greenmountaingal · 70-79, F
Yes! Good job of finishing your song. Post it here if you can.
St0ut · 51-55, M
Sure why not
animeloverrulez97 · 26-30, F
@St0ut ok here it goes give me your honest opinion I know it's not the best but I tried ok here goes


Set free

(First verse)
"I'm sinking farther from reality

I feel I'm not good enough anyway

This fire inside is burning out

And everything I touch start to turn to Ash"


(Chores)
What can I do when I tried everything I could

And my walls are crumbling down

Even when I try to smile through the pain

And i just wanna fix myself

How much more does it take and what must I do to finally be set free

To be set free" (chorus end)


(Second verse)
" How can I run

From what's inside

I'm always trying to stay strong

But now my world is fading

I know that I made mistakes

And I know life is not fair"



(Chores)
What can I do when I tried everything I could

And my walls are crumbling down

Even when I try to smile through the pain

And i just wanna fix myself

How much more does it take and what must I do to be set free"
(chorus end)


(Final verse)
" I want to be set free from this cage I'm trapped in

I feel like nothing will ever be alright

Is this the reality of life

I try to keep my head up

And this is my final wish that someone cares"

(Final chorus)

What can I do when I tried everything I could

And my final walls are crumbling down

Even when I try to smile through the pain

And i just wanna fix myself

How much more does it take and what must I do to finally be set free

To be set free" (chorus end)






Sorry about the grammar and the spelling still editing that part and It sounds better with music I promise so what you think
St0ut · 51-55, M
@animeloverrulez97 awww. It’s beaitiful. You are going to be ok just never quit.
animeloverrulez97 · 26-30, F
Thank you

 
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