I'm not so sure about the bass line but it might be just me. Another tip would be to make the piano at the end tighter, unless the theme is confusion then it works. You gotta make the piano a bit more predictable if you jump so harshly between notes it seems a bit random and can confuse the listener. Just my humble opinion. Congratulations and keep at it!
@kayoshin I looked up a few tutorials thataren't trap/ rap for the bass line. I came up with this [quote]https://soundcloud.com/redbycarter/theatre-rain[/quote]
Yea the bassline isn't wrong in itself i mean it sounds tight and you seem to have kept it in a key i just said i don't think it works because it doesn't follow or complement the melody it works alone but together they are so so. I'm gonna listen to the new version now :) Also don't get discouraged i may be talking about 2 negative things I hear but that just means everything else sounds good :)
