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Abstraction · 61-69, M
The last two. Particularly the last one. I like the tonal statements and moods, and the last one you've posed a question captured in her expression - you want to know what she's seeing. You want to know what she's thinking or feeling or facing. I also love your wonderfully careless-brushstroke background.
For the others...
The first one you have very clean lines, which I like. One glance and I'd say 90% sure drawn by a woman - it's a very feminine observation. Even though you've captured expressions, they're distant - more whimsical than character studies. They look like people posing and I'm not interested in any of them like I am with the last two works. Make me want to engage with a real person. Show me some character or vulnerability.
I don't like the second, but appreciate your technique. Looks like something for children's illustrations?
I really appreciate your ability. I hope my comments are ok.
For the others...
The first one you have very clean lines, which I like. One glance and I'd say 90% sure drawn by a woman - it's a very feminine observation. Even though you've captured expressions, they're distant - more whimsical than character studies. They look like people posing and I'm not interested in any of them like I am with the last two works. Make me want to engage with a real person. Show me some character or vulnerability.
I don't like the second, but appreciate your technique. Looks like something for children's illustrations?
I really appreciate your ability. I hope my comments are ok.
Scarlet5 · 26-30, F
Thank you so much for sharing your critiques and perspective, I appreciate every word! Taking notes! @Abstraction