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I Wonder If He Misses Me Like I Miss Him

If I tell you where I am, will you come find me?

I used to think that I'm safe anywhere in the world because he's there. Because I know my dad loves me enough that if I ever get lost or missing, he'll always come for me.

But now I'm in a place that feels safe. I want to show it to him. But some wishes just couldn't be.

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Tarxarin · 31-35, M

What a good prose. Thank you for sharing

Casheyane · 31-35, F

@Tarxarin It's more of my sentiments than a prose. But I'm pleased you found it good. Thanks :)

Tarxarin · 31-35, M

@Casheyane Idk it reads like a poem. Its a enigma a cristalization of experience and its awesome

Casheyane · 31-35, F

@Tarxarin Thank you. :) I love to write.

Tarxarin · 31-35, M

@Casheyane what got you started?

I also love to write.

Casheyane · 31-35, F

@Tarxarin I've always loved stories. But when my friends started writing fanfictions, they showed me how. Since then, I've been writing my own stories.

Show me something of yours? :)

Tarxarin · 31-35, M

@Casheyane

Fallen angel of vengeance

With his plans for every contingence

My searing sorrow cakes silenced wounds

Filling holes with,

Sweet songs of melancholy spirits

Loneliness breaches cognition

My mind reaches

And this soul screeches

Deaf are my ears, covered by all my fears

Now I realize, is this love nothing but leeches?

Will I do nothing but beeseches

Frantic panic I'm drowning inside to out

Sowing seeds of doubt, they grow to taste bitter
Left with nothing but mourning, with almost no warning

Values and principles saved my soul.

Now are they nothing more then a goal?

Knowledge paves the picture

Hell is on my horizon

Intention gets suspension

As I wish I knew more then submission

Only a little more propition.

Now caught, in transition, a whirlpool of frustration

A tool for dark shadows

Where are the Meadows of heaven?

Praise the father, for the pain and wisdom

Let optimism turn the other cheek

Casheyane · 31-35, F

@Tarxarin That's something alright. :) Though, why do I feel like it's about many things forced into one poem? Can I ask what's the title?

Tarxarin · 31-35, M

@Casheyane Just fallen angel. It's about the end of my relationship and how I lost myself when I lost that relationship.

I didn't write the poem it wrote me.

Casheyane · 31-35, F

@Tarxarin ahh. I think I should reread it again then. :)

Tarxarin · 31-35, M

@Casheyane if you have any edits please let me know. I'd be interested in your opinion.