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vacationgirl · 36-40, F
yes your English is bad. you talk like a dumbass Texan redneck pretending to be Mexican.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@vacationgirl I was born in Mexico also entire family is from Mexico
Existentior · M
For the second sentence I would use "we" instead of "you" because it's more consistent to use the same form (or you get problems such as dangling participles).
For the third sentence, I found a small problem: it should be "an illegal immigrant" because when the word following an indefinite article (a) starts with a vowel sound ((i)llegal), you should use 'an'; for example: an artist, an executive, an illusive person, they all begin with vowels. If you say it out loud it also rolls off the tongue.
For the fourth sentence, obviously a small typo: 'o' should be 'I'.
Your English construction is quite good for someone who's starting out in English.
For the third sentence, I found a small problem: it should be "an illegal immigrant" because when the word following an indefinite article (a) starts with a vowel sound ((i)llegal), you should use 'an'; for example: an artist, an executive, an illusive person, they all begin with vowels. If you say it out loud it also rolls off the tongue.
For the fourth sentence, obviously a small typo: 'o' should be 'I'.
Your English construction is quite good for someone who's starting out in English.
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Existentior · M
@Mariocrespo8546 To improve your grammar, just take up valid online courses (or find a personal tutor). Hm, now for losing the accent that is very difficult. You will either need people that help you improve it or you can use a program like Rosetta Stone, which has a setting for the tolerance level of your accent.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@Existentior okay I will I hear if you practice on your pronunciation some people nearly perfect native accent but it’s time. So I can definitely improve my English
Existentior · M
@Mariocrespo8546 What also helps is learning in-depth the vowel sounds of language. "ee" sounds different than "e", depending on the context. Context is really important. You need to have heard each different combination and you need to study their context so that you can apply it to other constructs.
SW-User
Mario, you said that you lived in the US before Trump was elected. Did he deport you or something?
SW-User
@es0tericus Don't mind him, he says a lot of things here. None of it should be taken seriously. I know him since EP days.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@SW-User no he sent me back to Mexico City. Can I come back
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@SW-User was I a blonde with blue eyes
DarkCrazyArtistGeekGamer · 31-35, T
Mostly good. Illegal or not, I support immigrants.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@DarkCrazyArtistGeekGamer To live in United States or or Mexico? We have immigration in Mexico too
DarkCrazyArtistGeekGamer · 31-35, T
@Mariocrespo8546 To USA. Trump wants a border wall but more illegal immigrants come from plane.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@DarkCrazyArtistGeekGamer Like all over Latin America
es0tericus · 26-30
It is actually better than most. Tiny mistakes. Like really minuscule. Good job so far.
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@es0tericus gracias I practice everyday. I took lots classes in school
Uncfred · 61-69, M
You do well your English is far better than my Spanish
Mariocrespo8546 · 31-35, M
@Uncfred keep Practicing In your Spanish. You listen to music or watch tv shows in Spanish. You get over time. I struggled first with my English
MarmeeMarch · M
Well - work hard and you will make lots of dough.
SW-User
Why Mario, Why ?
MarmeeMarch · M
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