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Restless Mind meandering through its vacant spaces The wind blew away the dirt tracks to my favourite hiding places So I sit amongst the light and the dark and the routines of night and day And I feel the unfathomable existence and loss of a...

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HitsWithaPillow · 36-40, M

Nice...I love writting as we'll gotta get in a special mood for it to flow, But then Im another person with a different heart and all things are possible. But I think it's as easy as changing my mind. Im sure you will awaken great things in many people with that type of writting. Thanks for sharing.

MayaHope · 41-45, F

Thank you for your time reading and commenting. Yes writing is about having an idea or feeling or sense of something and letting the words flow. What are you waiting for?@HitsWithaPillow

HitsWithaPillow · 36-40, M

@MayaHope Lol, It's heating up

SW-User

This is hauntingly beautiful, Maya & a very vulnerable write to say the least.🖤

MayaHope · 41-45, F

Thank you, it is one I wrote a while ago but it suited my mood, it was cathartic to write. Thank you for reading and being kind 😌@SW-User

midnightsun · 26-30, M

I like it except the last two lines.

Your poetry skills improving 😄

MayaHope · 41-45, F

Actually it is an old one

Poetry is more a therapeutic endeavour rather than an attempt to please.

This one was for me me me....@midnightsun

midnightsun · 26-30, M

@MayaHope cool!

MayaHope · 41-45, F

😝@midnightsun

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