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A Thing That Happens

So much thought, and way too damn fast.
Frustration ebbs and flows like the tide.
It's never over, but it never lasts.
I try my best to enjoy the ride.

Give it all you've got my boy 'o!
Keep your nose to the old grind stone.
Pull up the shades! Let in the light!
Don't talk so loud. Shut the hell up!

What are you doing with that shadow?
Don't sweat it. You're still here.
We just can't see you when your eyes are closed.
Another day ends. The night draws near.
Penny · 46-50, F
I like this but i find the last verse confusing
Oberon1 · 61-69, M
@Penny Well, the whole poem is a case study in abnormal psychology, and a particular person's 'head troubles'. The last part is both, a figurative, and surreal reference, to the alienation that sometimes happens between someone with a mental illness, and those who care for him / her.

 
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