Frontiersman64 · 56-60, M
OMG ....I can feel the power of emotions here .....awesome
Richard65 · M
It's a powerful poem, but your detailed explanation about its meaning undermines it somewhat. In my opinion, you should set your art free to find its own way in the world and allow people to read it or look at it and take their own meaning from it, possibly not the meaning you originally intended, especially with poetry. That's the beauty of art. Once you let it go, it belongs to everybody so they can interpret it their own way.
But you're very talented.
But you're very talented.
Luckylu · 61-69, F
@Richard65 I appreciate your words. If I were publishing it in a book, then that is what I would do but I’m not. I placed it here where I have a few new friends who have helped me through some difficulties lately. They don’t know me well enough to know what I will do and what I will not do. My words are to reassure them, as I do not want them worrying about me, since they do know how I’m feeling is very much written into the poems I write. This one even surprised me when it emerged. If I were a friend of someone who wrote this poem I would have been concerned for her welfare.
Thank you for the compliment in regards to my writing.
Thank you for the compliment in regards to my writing.
Montanaman · M
I feel this poem, as it was intended.
I often go to that deep place where pain is suppressed instead of felt. Where numbness stings like a dead bee. The stinger pulsating and pumping it's poison; depression, into my exposed skin.
It's actually subtle, and often goes unnoticed for days, weeks.
But She whispers softly, calling me home. 🤗✍️🤗❤️
I often go to that deep place where pain is suppressed instead of felt. Where numbness stings like a dead bee. The stinger pulsating and pumping it's poison; depression, into my exposed skin.
It's actually subtle, and often goes unnoticed for days, weeks.
But She whispers softly, calling me home. 🤗✍️🤗❤️
Luckylu · 61-69, F
@Montanaman It isn’t often I allow myself to go into those dark places. Thanks for sharing with me.

SW-User
Hi Lu, yes, I agree, it all stays with us until we truly deal with it. You can't push the dirt under the carpet. At my age I still sometimes try.
All the best. Keep writing. Thanks.
All the best. Keep writing. Thanks.
Luckylu · 61-69, F
@SW-User Thank you for your kind words. The hard part is knowing when I do push anything under the carpet. A childhood of learning to do that and a life time of trying to break it. It is such an easy thing to do.
Fertilization · 36-40, F
Can I borrow this??
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Fertilization · 36-40, F
@Luckylu of course. That’s the reason I have asked for your permission.
Luckylu · 61-69, F
@Fertilization I appreciate you asking. Tell them I wish them well, if it helps, then it has served a purpose. ♥️
Fertilization · 36-40, F
@Luckylu Loving your kind words. I would definitely convey your msg. They would love it.🥰
masterofyou · 70-79, M
🖤
DavyPNW · 56-60, M
Our subconscious can pave the way to ecstacy or the depths of hell
RemovedUsername1421548 · 61-69, M
Have you 'EVEN' watched sex in the city ???
Luckylu · 61-69, F