Murky Water Shores (poem)
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gdon39 · 41-45, M
It's a wonderful expression of feelings. A bit heavy for me today but it wasn't written for me. I think it's a great poem.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@gdon39 thank you very much. Unfortunately I've had depression my whole life, and this is what I know. My feelings are kinda dark.
gdon39 · 41-45, M
@melissa001 If it's okay with you I will share some of my poetry with you after a bit. I'll need to upload it.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@gdon39 that's fine.☺️
therighttothink50 · 56-60, M
Hope you don't mind, I put a poem together because I can relate, but just hang in there, can I share it?
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@therighttothink50 of course i dont care. Im glad.
Yes you can share it.
Yes you can share it.
therighttothink50 · 56-60, M
@melissa001
My inflicted soul is too much to bare,
Locked away, I no longer share,
The key to it is withered and broken,
Obsolete as a subway token,
My heart has turned into dust and ash,
Scattered amongst a bin of trash,
My jumbled mind is lost within another time,
Hope, something I know longer attempt to find,
My hum drum life no longer beats to a rhythmic drum,
It's lost within a monotone hum,
Looking into the great abyss,
It's my youthful days I sincerely miss.....
My inflicted soul is too much to bare,
Locked away, I no longer share,
The key to it is withered and broken,
Obsolete as a subway token,
My heart has turned into dust and ash,
Scattered amongst a bin of trash,
My jumbled mind is lost within another time,
Hope, something I know longer attempt to find,
My hum drum life no longer beats to a rhythmic drum,
It's lost within a monotone hum,
Looking into the great abyss,
It's my youthful days I sincerely miss.....
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@therighttothink50 im so glad i could inspire you. I love your poem as well. 😊
Dino11 · M
That's tough.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Dino11 life in general is tuff. Thanks for commenting.
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