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I Love the Ocean

Floating


Floating alone
in the ocean
So much water
Far Far ahead
where the ships
Going for adventure
Eventually fall off

So much water
far far behind
where the sun sinks
and sins follow like
oil spills.

So much water
Far far below
Where the fish
carry lanterns
at the end of sticks
Tied to their nose

So far above

The Sky

They say it's pretty
and warm.

And everything is

white

Or blue

Or gold
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
Wicked good writing! Your visions are full of a depth that matches that of the ocean.
BaasMan · M
HotMessExpress102 · 41-45, F
No, I thank you for allowing my eyes to grace the wonderment of your words here 👍🏻@BaasMan
SW-User
I like this. Thanks for sharing.
BaasMan · M
@SW-User you're welcome.

 
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