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Ok, how is this? I decided to just write it on my own anyways, I dont wanna cheat anymore.
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The 1967 black and white image of [i]The Selma March[/i] shot by William Lovelace records the bravery of thousands of people are led by Martin Luther King with him side by side with his wife, Coretta Scott King on the streets from Selma sacrificing safety for their freedom. The impression of the black and white colors, white seems to be more noticeable rather than anything else as a focal point. The texture of the clothing contracts with the rough surface. All of the elements convey a circle of freedom. Which is what the American Flag symbolizes freedom and democracy.
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firefall · 61-69, M
That's pretty good - I'm not sure about the circle of freedom bit, but then I'm not american.

On a technical level, the last bit needs to get restructured - you can't have the last sentence stand-alone, as it's a dependant clause (i.e. the "which" has no reference inside the sentence), so:

[quote]All of the elements convey a circle of freedom, which is what the American Flag symbolizes, freedom and democracy[/quote]

or
[quote]All of the elements convey a circle of freedom, the meaning behind the American Flag[/quote]

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