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@TryingtoLava
Ladies first
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So it begins? ;)
@SW-User NO editing! Thats cheatinggg
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@TryingtoLava not even small grammar errors? Or mispelled words? ;_;
Nope. This is free style boiii ;)

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Eternity · 26-30, M
I have arrived
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@Eternity@SW-User
Let me start off with: Rap stands for Rhythm and Poetry
How the heck are you both rappers and not seem to know of these?
You both may have flow, and we know that we both agree
But your rhythm can't glow til you stop letting go of the P!
Schooling you two would surely be of the more noble deeds
If I had to give grades, you'd both get close to a lower D
I'm a boss at the rap game but this ain't my diplomacy
I can spit burns and flex and I'll do it so notably

@Eternity: Called up on me the moment he chose to overtly
Talk about my lines disrespectfully, so openly
I think it's time that you notice me; I prove the O of G's
So stop talking to me about your falsehoods and your theories

Was that your best shot? I expect more vitality ._.
You don't seem like you're trying.... which line was fatality? .-.
I don't get your sick mind and hypersexual mentality
If you can't rap without d1cks, you hit yourself with lethality
My bars don't change, just my interest, so believe me
If you really showed game, then I'd rap harder.... you peewee
You're just a creep fiend talking pee-pee's, making deep scenes
Whenever you rap, my drive suddenly decreases!
If you want to get schooled, then just know it's what I BE teaching
The next lesson I give won't be on B-trees
Before you step to me, know your place cuz you're not big league
The last thing you wrote is comparable next to feces


@SW-User
Bro, you talk hot?
You need to just stop
You can't claim you're the top
Then THAT'S what you just dropped
You're acting hard? Talking about whippin a Glock?
How the heck is that tough: when that's EVERY rapper on the block?
You talk with flow, but your lines.. I mind that
You got an upright mind, but your rap is lying flat
You just said "flicking my bean," I was like where the hell did he find THAT?
I had to step back and [b]rewind that[/b] like [big]dayum![/big]... that was a good line but why would rhyme THAT??
I mean... >__>
You CHOSE to design THAT
Your username has SIGNED that...
I told @Eternity not stop being dirty, you know I advised that
My broski :v
WHERE IS YOH MIND AT?
I almost chose not to reply back
Besides that, y'all are acting like blind rats
Even the three blind mice see the burns I spat
Eternity · 26-30, M
Nice and that's facts. Your words did swarm;I'll give you that. But dont think that will throw me off track. Get ready for a storm...because that last rap wasnt even my final form.



Oh. A lesson? Well let me get a pencil. Time to study underneath the nation's most lyrical incel. I'll learn to leave finesse behind; dont write lines, just use the stencils provided by the magnificent moguls whose mandates keep the world so damned divided.

No longer will I reference nary a dick nor a cooter. You nailed this student so on point, just like a school shooter 😂. I'm surprised; such raw power! I'm sure you expect to be showered in flowers and publicized by Reuters. Well then we'll just have to War atop these Roses Mr. sex rebuker. You may be a teacher, but I'm a fucking Tudor.

Like the royals I foil any attempts to seize my throne. Not even a sea of enemy soldiers seeking to pick me to the bone could succeed at uprooting my seed, its rooted too thickly in loam. Meanwhile yours suffocates and is stifled; shriveling slowly on a scorched and searing stone.

Best to embrace your darker impulses mate, because bro if there's a lord then he knows; you cant hide. Your cock will still crow even if you disown it three times. He said it with parables, I say it with ryhmes, but we both said it's better to be naked than clothe oneself with a lie.

I say again that puritan doctrine wont get you very far. You hide from your monsters; I party Where them Wild Things Are. To live is, just like to rap, is to tap into both yin [i]and[/i] yang brother.

Now do better next time or it's off to bed without supper.
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@Eternity I gotta admit, that was a really good one ._.
Dang
Back again cerealguy?
Its been awhile but im not shy
I rhyme words like a science
They call me Bill nye
So lemme teach you lessons three
Listen up
Take a knee
Rule one never step to lava so hot
I ride like a knight through Camelot
Step two keep your rhymes concise
Look where youre goin
This isnt three blind mice
Final lesson i will preach
Is what comes next i cant really teach
Its in your heart cerealguy
So step up to the mic and learn to fly
But better
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@TryingtoLava okay, so we both step it up! I like it!
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@TryingtoLava you won this round
marsbar · F
You 4 are wicked awesome! 😃😃I love these rap battles! Can’t wait for the next one! 😍🙌🏼✌🏼
CountScrofula · 41-45, M
@marsbar Seriously, best thread in a long while.
marsbar · F
@CountScrofula Yeah! I forgot Lava rapped. Eternity is new to me, but I didn’t know Headlines could rap, & he sounded great in his recording too!
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Omg game on!! ⚔️
@SW-User old school guuurrrll
@SW-User <3 <3 <3 i love youu
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@TryingtoLava Ily too 💜💜💜
Pin this cerealguy
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@TryingtoLava I’m cheering 🎉🎉
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You guys are so cool 🤩
Had so much fun reading
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@SW-User XD
I'm glad you enjoyed yo!
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@deadgerbil TF????!!!

 
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