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I Write Song Lyrics, Poetry, and Short Stories

I think I just wrote a Country Song...๐ŸŽถ

"You hit me, like a shot of whiskey."


A shot of Jack, or a bottle of Crown,
For the whole damn place,
Another round,
A toast comes easily off my lips,
"Here's to you Darlin'"
The empty glass falls from my fingertips,
Oh what can I do,
My head spins, my heart aches,
My heart breaks,
From missing you,
Then, it hits me,
Like a shot of whiskey,
Missing your smile, your eyes
Golden gleam,
Your luscious lips,
A now distant dream,
A kiss from them, goes to my head,
I can't admit it, I can't believe that our love is dead,
Another shot, I'm spinnin' round,
I'm drunk on your love,
Can't find the ground,
Then you hit me,
Like a shot of whiskey,
That sudden warm and fuzzy feeling,
You knock me off my feet,
And I'm reeling,
Yeah, you hit me like a shot of whiskey,
I'm drunk on your Love,
I can't fight that feeling,
That's come over me,
I'm head over heels for you,
Don't you see,
You hit me,
Like a shot of whiskey,
I've never been so in love,
That my tummy butterflies,
At that magic sparkle of your eyes,
So it should come as no surprise,
But it does, and you did,
Yeah, you hit me like a shot of whiskey,
I tell the barkeep just one more,
I need you now, more than ever before,
I'm drunk on your love,
I'm drunk on you,
I'll have another shot,
You.
You blow me away,
When you sit down beside me and smile and say,
"Bartender,
Make that two!"


Kelly.
Fallflower ยท 46-50, F
Nothing like the dichotomy of a deep male country voice singing โ€œmy tummy butterfliesโ€... awesome!
Montanaman ยท M
@Fallflower smiles๐Ÿ˜Š thank you.
It's very nice to meet you.
I'm Kelly.
Writer and photographer.๐ŸŒน
Honestly you have to record this!
"Then, it hits me,
Like a shot of whiskey" -- solid gold!
Montanaman ยท M
@CinnamonWorlds thanks so much, but I'm afraid my vocals are worse than Kristofferson. LoL ๐Ÿ˜‚
Mamapolo2016 ยท F
I already commented on this. You are not going unread. (Although it often feels that way.)
Montanaman ยท M
@Mamapolo2016 thank you, again.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—
anotherplanet ยท F
it is a poem! and a beautiful one at that!!:)
scabs ยท 51-55, T
Damn this is actually pretty good
Montanaman ยท M
@scabs thank you ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Mamapolo2016 ยท F
It's good. Now sing it for us.

[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PYIrs1Dx4Ck]
LittleBittyPretty1 ยท 46-50, F
Wow! Really good!!โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Montanaman ยท M
@LittleBittyPretty1 ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—๐Ÿคญ thank you ๐Ÿ’ž

 
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