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Worship is pointless
Our gods have abandoned us
They're the heretics
Renikari
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SINAI · T
Heh, you actually missed a syllable on the last line?
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SINAI · T
@Renikari: They're has one syllable...
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Renikari · F
@Silhouette: And counting the syllables in the other two words, how many does that add up to?
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SINAI · T
@Renikari: Heretics has three? I guess you learn something new everyday.
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Aidan · 26-30
Worship gives God thanks
The Lord is with us always
Love shows through worship
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Aidan · 26-30
Not sure if I did that right lol
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Renikari · F
@Nonexistent: The top and bottom lines must have five syllables and the middle line must have seven.
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