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I Love to Write Poetry

Writing Challenge for May 16th.

Blurred Vision

I'm locked in a cage of my own devices
Lost in a sea of contrasting hormones
Waving at me from one side to the other
It's a constant blur
When it feels like I am walking away
The leash tends to pull me back
Taking me into the feminine side of life
As my thoughts seem to be unraveled
I look at my reflection
Seduced by the feeling it gives me
Wary of the consequences
But mesmerized by what is wrapped around me
Clothes do make the woman
Very well said! I think , to a degree, we are locked in cages of our own desires, shackled by our inhibitions and limitations. The lucky ones break free and learn to live and love life.
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@Elandra77 Oh so true. I wish that it was easy to take that step and break the chains and escape the cage we seem to lock ourselves in. Thanks for the comments Elandra
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Wow that was very deep. I think you may have described it perfectly for many.
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@Fungirlmmm Thank you fungirlmmm.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Beautifully written
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@ChampagneOnIce thank you so much.

 
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