I Have Random Thoughts

She cast the line and I had bitten;
This deceptive beauty had me smitten.
I flip and flop as the sun burns me dry;
Dead, deceased, in the pan I fry.

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SincereDevil · 51-55, M

You may have bigger fish to fry
Hang her on the clothesline to dry

Something tells me her story is rotten
Summers gone, get rid of all your cotton

LOL

SW-User

That is very good.

Madelenie · 26-30, F

I like this, a lot.

Samael

:) Thank you! I'm glad you do

Madelenie · 26-30, F

Kinda feeling the words tbh...

Samael

-hug- It's not just me then :)

GlitzandGlamber · 26-30, F

[c=#BF0080] I adores this! It's brilliant. Did you write it?[/c]

Samael

Yes I did :) It's really just a small reflection on how I felt about something. I'm glad you like it!

SincereDevil · 51-55, M

@Samael: I thought it was about the fish your caught. LOL

Samael

Maybe I had caught fish; who knows? :D
I like people reading it and then coming to their own conclusions :D

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