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She was Smoke


[center][b]She was Smoke[/b][/center]

[center][i]Burning like so many branches
From a fire lit within
Exhaling all my chances
And filling the air with sin

All the mirrors seeing clearer
I cannot hide what I project
An empty nest burns nearer
And it's just as bright and quick

Like Deja vu, I'm dreaming
Like a sad forgotten song
Yet it fills my soul with meaning
So I've tried to sing along

Sultry whispers; silky breaths
My flames had their imaginings
And shaped her in swirling patterns
Forming memories and things that mattered

Hauntingly familiar thoughts
Calling all of mine distraught
I forgot all those letters I wrote
When I was the fire and she was smoke

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August writing prompts #8 'From Within' -- thank you @ChampagneOnIce for the prompts and @Magenta for cluing me in. I wouldn't have posted if I didn't see yours! 馃槉

https://similarworlds.com/literature/4418454-August-Writing-Prompts-For-those-whod-like-some
FoolishLuna56-60, F
I miss all the great writers and poets from EP. thanks for sharing this!
CCMorgan51-55, M
@FoolishLuna I am very glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for your kind words! Means a lot to me 馃槍
LilymoonF
@Montanaman that's so cool 馃榿
MontanamanM
@Lilymoon 馃憤馃馃槑
LilymoonF
@Montanaman haha nice 馃榿
MagentaF
Aw this is beauteous and creative. I am so glad you saw the prompts and wrote. I've been thinking of you and hoping you would. 馃挋馃
CCMorgan51-55, M
@Magenta Thank you kindly M. 鈽猴笍馃挏 I'm glad I saw your posts! I hope to write some more. I need the "push" the prompts bring 馃槈
ChampagneOnIce51-55, F
Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for writing! I love your poetry.
CCMorgan51-55, M
@ChampagneOnIce You鈥檙e very kind, thank you! 馃
Sparklesatnite51-55, F
so very well written your very talented keep up the good work ,thanks for sharing its a joy to read and feel each word written with in .
CCMorgan51-55, M
@Sparklesatnite What a nice thing to say 馃 thank you for your kindness! 馃尮
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IwillwaitM
Pretty Good!
CCMorgan51-55, M
@Iwillwait Thank you!
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IwillwaitM
Thank you, I needed this@Funnycat @Funnycat
LostpoetM
馃槕well done old man
CCMorgan51-55, M
@Lostpoet thank you, spry guy! 馃槣

 
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