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I found my old notes....

Searching in my dream.....

No reflection of who we used to be.

We could have, but we didn't,

We wanted, but it never happened.

Day, dream of sleeping,

Night, nightmare of tomorrow.

Bearing the deep wounds of our destiny, we stay empty of love.

Knocking on the gates of the darkness, we await the funeral of our hearts.
SW-User
Beautiful poetry sweetheart...Heavy stuff...I do hate to think you were ever by some chance living this when you wrote it..❤️
@SW-User

Thank you darling... I too, am glad that it's passed..

You know that I stand in a completely different place now... ❤😘🤗
SW-User
@Soossie ❤️ Thank you sweetheart.
JustNik · 51-55, F
This makes me think of hope and optimism as I picture you now happy in your love having known such disheartening pain. There is peace in the journey. 🤗❤️❤️❤️
@JustNik

I am passed through two very dark lives... I needed to learn a lesson... I hope that I have...

Thank you beautiful for your kind heart.. 🤗🤗🌹😘
That is really hauntingly beautiful.
@Spracer

Thank you... you are very kind..

This is a dark note of my dark days... 🙏🙏
@Soossie You are welcome and glad they are past.
Khenpal1 · M
you need to be more daring ;)
@Khenpal1

Lol... in what way??
Khenpal1 · M
@Soossie to start with , cross the street when red light is on. Small steps Lady 😉
samueltyler2 · 80-89, M
Is the profile photo you? It is awesome.
@samueltyler2

Thank you... no, not me..
GunFinger · F
Hi Soosie..it's beautiful. I hope you're okay.🤗
@GunFinger

Hi beautiful... absolutely...

This is one of my old notes of my passed dark days...

Thank you for caring and asking... 🤗😘🌹
pearllederman · 61-69, F
thats a good poem, did you write it
@pearllederman

Thank you dear Pearl... yes, I did.. 🤗🌹😘
Zzxxxx · 56-60, M
Great poetry 🌹
@Zzxxxx

Thank you very much...
And yet your friendship meant much more than the funeral?
@thewindupbirdchronicles

Ok... thank you for reading...
@Soossie Soosie, you are kind. Thank you being that.

 
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