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Not sure if I am posting this correctly

I posted this earlier but I just got to thinking that maybe I posted in the wrong group or something.
I guess I am just trying to figure out the posting procedure to get this stuff in the correct group or groups.
So this is a test not spam.
https://similarworlds.com/music/lyrics/4318511-Me-and-lostPoet-made-a-song-Kind-of-proud-of-this
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
"The Misery of You"

You taught me to hate my voice
My clothes and my grace
You taught me to never look
people in the face

You taught me that no one cares
Let alone myself
You taught me how to turn
heaven into hell

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and lock them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays

You taught me to expect nothing
and give myself for free
You taught me how to accept life's
little miseries

You taught me that something's wrong
in a state of decay
You taught me that I'm not strong
and will never be

You have shown me misery
not just today
You cut me to the bone
with what you don't say

You pick up the pieces
and locked them away
You plant your seed in my brain
and there it stays
Repete · 61-69, M
I’m not much of a music critic but I liked it because I could hear the words and get the feeling.
I listened to the whole song, not completely my type but definitely better than most rap and way better than some of the screeching songs that I’ve turned off within 30 sec .
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Repete Thank you for this. I am glad you listened all the way through.
We are all music critics to our selves. :-)
This is actually a team effort by LostPoet and myself. Oh LostNForgotten now I think.
He wrote this as a poem that really hit home for me.
I will post the lyrics as a comment.
Also, it was my second time using some new recording software so it is a bit ruff.
Thanks again. :-)
AdaXI · 41-45, T
If you are posting noodz put nudity. That's everything you'll need to know.
乂^◡^乂

 
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