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Sad Poetry...Can You See

CAN you see what I've not seen
through eyes that have grown old?

CAN you feel what I've not felt
with hands so very cold?

CAN u know what I've not thought
to love to have to hold?

And CAN u say what I've not said
the words I've never told?


YES I can see what u can't see
through eyes of brown and gold.

YES I can feel what u can't feel
with hands that I can hold.

YES I can guess what u have thought
if I may be so bold.

AND I can say what u can not
"PLEASE STAY AS I GROW OLD. "
LostpoetM
Damn, nice rhyming and flow. Music to my ears. 馃槍
melissa00151-55, F
@Lostpoet yeah it does seam similar
. We're u writing about someone imparticular?
melissa00151-55, F
Were
LostpoetM
@melissa001 No. Just wanted in a bad mood wanting to write something but couldn't so I put the thought a way pretty quick. Your poem just kind of reminded me I think it was the I have not seen through eyes.

 
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