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I Want To Watch A Beach Sunset

For Fungirlmmm's this week's writing challenge



I want to watch a beach sunset,
with you.
Hand in hand,
toes in the sand.
Shared smiles beaming.
Together entranced
tired but delighted,
deliriously cheerful
your sunny disposition
leaves me intoxicated
your smiling eyes sparkling
the sun in My Eyes and my rampant radiant Heart.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Well done!

Particularly this line:

“tired but delighted”

Love it!
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
If I had written a bit later into the evening it might have been tired and emotional - that would never do ... 🤪@BexEyes
SW-User
Beautiful! I love that last line... 'my rampant radiant heart'.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@SW-User Thank you - I nearly use rambunctious instead - rampant was kinder to me 🤗
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
The shadow of the castle reached to their comfortable hut.
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Oh I love this. It is funny, because I added radiant heart because someone here told me that I have a mind and radiant heart. :) I love the direction you went this week. Thank you for joining us again. :)
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@Fungirlmmm thank you - this one was more or less already written for me 😎
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
SW-User
I love this... the sentiment, and because nothing beats intimacy before the ocean!
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@SW-User thank you - it is as i think you have spotted my favourite place - 🙂
SW-User
@SailingSlow I have written about the it often too😁

You're welcome too..
SW-User
Nice piece of poetry and the perfect pic to go with it. Well done!
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
I love watching sunsets at the beach - beautiful!
That does sound divine!
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@Elandra77 the daft thing is I have been turning this thought in my mind for well over a decade now - it started at a leadership training conference where we students were stood in a circle and asked to close our eyes and hold a picture in our mind of future success and how it would look and feel at that future time - my picture was just this. Standing barefoot on a warm sandy beach - having completed a long slow sail - at sunset and hand in hand with someone whom I was madly head over heels in love with, while feeling totally happy, capable, goal achieved and relaxed......

.... just need to meet her now 🙃
pennynoodles · 56-60, F
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@pennynoodles thank you 🙂
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Peaches · F
[i][b][c=#BF0000]Love it💕💜😍[/c][/b][/i]

 
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