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I Want People to Share Their Poetry

[c=#4C0073]My Eternal Dream
by: CountryPoet

I close my eyes in search of a sign
But all my thoughts make me feel more behind
No one knows the way that I feel
Not even I can tell what's real

I've lived in the past for so long
I don't even know what's right and what's wrong
I wish you'd tell me what to do
But you don't even have a clue

I don't know if I should run and scream
Or close my eyes and wake up in a dream
All my thoughts make me doubt my worth
Cause you're not here with me on Earth

I'll admit this decision was tough
But the way things are just isn't enough
So when I go to sleep tonight
That's when I'm gonna take my life

So please let me tell you what is real
Please let me try and tell you how I feel
Cause if you can't be here with me
I'll close my eyes and I'll be free[/c]
TexasGrandpa · 61-69, M
Another beautiful poem. Well done.
CountryPoet · 36-40, F
[c=#005E2F]Thank you so much!!![/c]
Carla1951 · 70-79, F
Wow C.P. you have quite a talent with words. But the sadness brings me down.
I must say your photo shows someone a lot younger than 30's. I've been wondering how to load a photo myself. There is no instructions on how to do it. I do wish they had a particular corner to post our poetry. I have a great deal of it on another hard drive.
From the heart. Nice.

 
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