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[c=#003BB2]I Hate Your Eyes
by: CountryPoet

I hate your eyes
When they look at me that way
I hate your smile
That has burned its way into my brain
I hate the things
I always put myself through
I hate these feelings
I feel no matter what you do

You pull me in
Entrance me
Then you pull away
Become a memory
You play with my mind
Time after time
That's why
I hate your eyes

I hate your eyes
The way they stare right through me
I hate my mind
And all the things you've made it believe
I hate the thoughts
That keep me up late at night
I hate myself
For letting you control my life[/c]

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TexasGrandpa · 61-69, M

Wonderful, strong and powerful. True feelings expressed beautifully.

CountryPoet · 36-40, F

[c=#005E2F]Thank you!!! ♡[/c]

TexasGrandpa · 61-69, M

You are very welcome. I've written one about eyes, though it goes a different direction.

Let Your Eyes Smile At Me

I almost lose my senses
when your eyes smile at me.
It's as if a thousand waves
had come crashing from the sea.

Your hands can brush my skin
and leave it tingly.
But if you want to drive me wild,
let your eyes smile at me.

Your kisses set my soul on fire,
your love can set me free.
I'm like a child who can't find home,
till your eyes smile at me.

It's like I'm locked away in jail,
and your heart holds the key.
Or maybe it's more like a prize,
like honey to a bee.

For laughter brings the gift of joy,
and joy makes sorrow flee.
To wrap me round your finger tight,
let your eyes smile at me.

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