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I Write Bad Poetry

We got along like seal milk on a dumpster fire,
t'was all the more so impressive that yon maiden was stacked -
like a tattoo of Betty Boop on the elbow of a white power felon stirring the gruel kettle,
Her memory burnt like unfine wine into my retinals,
leaving but a whisp of foggy paddleboat rides around the midfield to recall the mindfeels
she alone managed to short circuit all my poetics,forever,in all guises,
for all the saggy dates to follow,lingering in aroma and what might have seemed clever
That's actually the first piece of excellent poetry I've seen on this site.
Reads like a first draft that could have a little polish with the structure and cadences,
but I'm nevertheless very impressed.
@dubkebab You can friend me and message me on ideas if you like.
I write poetry, short stories and novels, and I'm an editor.
I generally check in here about once a day - though sometimes I might be absent for a week or two. I'll always reply to messages as soon as I see them,
dubkebab · 51-55, M
@hartfire Hi five there,clothos
I like your style.
@dubkebab Ditto.
YoungPoet345 · 26-30, F
Lord, I was born a ramblin' man
Tryin' to make a livin' and doin' the best I can
And when it's time for leavin'
I hope you'll understand
That I was born a ramblin' man
dubkebab · 51-55, M
@YoungPoet345 How come those guys can write a winning song but not me?
-at least mine had some different smells happening in a short time frame.
YoungPoet345 · 26-30, F
@dubkebab lol, everyone’s a winner! Check under your seat for your prize.
dubkebab · 51-55, M
@YoungPoet345 wow,20% off coupon for barnes n noble ! cooool.
ravenwind43 · 51-55, F
Well......🤣
dubkebab · 51-55, M
@ravenwind43 No recreational drugs were harmed during the making of this episode.
ravenwind43 · 51-55, F
@dubkebab give me some! JK 😁

 
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