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I Write Poems

Just One More Day

When you looked at me with your loving eyes,
Tell me just what did you see?

When you held my hand with your loving touch,
Tell me just what did you feel?

When you heard my voice ring out to you,
Tell me just what did you hear?

When you buried your nose behind my ear,
Tell me just what did you inhale?


When you closed your eyes to kiss me,
Tell me just what did you dream?

I ask myself those questions every day
As your memory continues to haunt me.
Wishing I had just one more day in your arms
Just one more day to tell you that I love you
One more day to say...............Goodbye.
Tons of hugs to you my dear friend. Your poem is wonderful and very touching in a very sad way. Reading it makes me think about my mum and makes me miss her more than I already do. I know, not every part of your beautiful written poem fits to a relationship between a mum and her son, but nevertheless, your words touched me deep in my heart and mind. And I am sure, the one you wrote this poem for, would love it, too with all his heart XOXOXOXOXOX
SweetMae · 70-79, F
Very touching. We all wish for just one day at sometime. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.
Ambroseguy80 · 51-55, M
How beautifully written, my friend!!! Hope you're well. 💋
Never enough, dear silent. Never!
May the fragrance of flowers makes (((your))) moments even more beautiful. 🌷🌹
Gingersnapped · 61-69, F
One more day could give a whole different outcome. Sigh 😔

 
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