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How can you conclude in essay on immigration ?

I'm French...So my English is kinda limited x) I'm struggling
SimplyTracie · 26-30, F
In conclusion, The Statue of Liberty, a gift from the people of France to the people of the United States.

Written on the base of the statue: “Give me your tired, your poor, Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free, The wretched refuse of your teeming shore. Send these, the homeless, tempest-tossed to me, I lift my lamp beside the golden door”

I hold these words close to my heart as most Americans are descendants of immigrants.
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Immigration is truly a helpful policy to our country. Without it, we would not be the America we are today. But like many other good things, too much is not good. If unchecked, immigration could become a heavy burden on our economy. However, a certain amount of immigrant has been shown to positively effect our country’s economy. Controlled immigration is with out a doubt the way to go.
whowasthatmaskedman · 70-79, M
Hit the high points.
* Immigration has been part of the human condition since there were humans.
*Immigration properly managed leads to cultural development and fosters tolerance.
*Immigration actually benefits economic growth by promoting consumption to supply the new arrivals.
*Immigration promotes genetic diversity, progressing the evolution of the species.
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Is your essay for or against or in the middle?
ArwenPandora · 26-30, F
@SW-User Hum in a way, but not too biased
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@ArwenPandora

Okay, so it should be something like a short summary of both points, and then your own opinion..

To conclude, immigration can be a double-edged sword, while some will observe [present main reason for] others will only feel the sharpness of the other edge [present main reason against], I personally find [give your own opinion], [give exmaple if you wish.] And the truth remains as relative as it has always been.

Hope this can help. Good luck. :)
ArwenPandora · 26-30, F
@SW-User Thank you very much ♥ It helps a whole lot
Saige · 61-69, M
Viva la immigracion! C’est tout!
PotPrincess1 · 36-40, M
We need to build a wall

 
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