Just a taste of WIP

Adam’s mind began spinning as thoughts filled his head, She felt soft, he could hear her heartbeat and the loud rushing sounds of each thump began to slow to an even pace of calm. Then he heard a new sound, she was crying. Why? Was he hurting her? No, her heart told him otherwise. So why was she …

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ammelee · F

WIP as in
work in progress?

she was crying because she was on the edge
but couldn't reach a climax

Coletracer · M

@ammelee It is a romantic part of the story, but their relationship isn't at that point... yet. I write novels when I'm not out working on my small ranch. This one WIP has haunted me for a few years. I keep laying it aside but my muse keeps insisting I finish it.

PoetryNEmotion · F

Crying with joy. That' s what was happening. She felt his love so deeply, so powerfully that crying was the first reaction. This startled and surprised him, both. He had never experienced a woman who loved this way. Deeply. Openly. With all of her heart. * leaves smiling...I do so love happy endings or beginnings for that matter*

SW-User

So Why was she is the answer for this.

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