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Brother.

Brother. Do you remember the games
In the street?
The stories you read
as we were getting to sleep

Do you remember
Steve Young, Stockton, Malone
You remember that night
you drove me home
I was drinking and you were thinking
What kind of brother could I be

( You know I hate when you sound like father to me)

You were always the best brother
I wish I could show you
That which you choose not to see
You were the best brother
a brother I wish I could be

(Here it is. can you see?)

Remember the fights?
I must say you were mostly right
I remember the tunes
I can still hear you from my room

(Even now, though we live a city apart)

Do you remember when
And do you remember when
We were still friends
I want to get high again

I am sorry I said you were a bad man
I was in a bar and some man
Thought he knew who you were

I never meant what I said

( " Your Matt's little brother? I know Matt he's a good man." 'You don't know who he is')

Remember when I told you
I wish I was dead
and then you said
what you said
And I've hated you ever since

But what you said
Isn't what I thought you meant
Come on man let's have a drink
Let's be friends

( I'm sorry Brother)
Grateful4you · M Best Comment
You have clearly a flair for language and digging deep into your own psyche and bringing to the forefront your most sacred and oft times dark secrets.

Keep up the great work. You'll go far.
@Grateful4you And thank you for being.
Lostpoet · M
@Grateful4you Thanks dude😁🤔 i guess i take back that whole shrink comment.
@Lostpoet I can tell this is your PASSION embrace your art poetry is the hardest market but I guess you know that. Persevere others less capable have done it so can you.

So beautifully sad.
@Lostpoet Actually I feel guilty when I say it was a big relief when she left us
Lostpoet · M
@mondayschild2 Alcohol changes people your sister wasn't the same sis that you grew up with.
@Lostpoet Exactly!
Dewkissedrose · 46-50, F
Very well written... lots of highs and lows
Lostpoet · M
@Dewkissedrose Thank you and more lows than ups.
Peaches · F
Great job my friend, 😊 [i][c=#BF0000]love it♥️[/c][/i]
Lostpoet · M
@Peaches 😁TY!
LadyJ · F
Just beautiful you have alot of talent
Lostpoet · M
@LadyJ 😁Thank you!
trackman11 · 61-69, M
You are talented. This is well done.
Lostpoet · M
@trackman11 😁 thanks man. 🍻
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Lostpoet · M
@Sheer 😁Thank You!

 
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