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I Love to Write

I wrote this for a friend who faded into other things. Something possessed me to post it for all those who come and go and leave their foot prints on my heart in large and small ways. May the other things you fade into be good things that make you happy. Peace and strength.

For Friends

If I were the wind,
If I were the sun
If I were the soil
If I was a clear refreshing spring.......
I would be these things for you.

elementals and directions
North, south, east , and west.
Earth, air, fire, and water.
be where you must be
bring what you must bring.
The circle grows in the warmth of flame.

pulled by the moon,
the tides and waves give and take.
The death of winter
the birth of spring
the world turns
and the universe sees itself
with your eyes.

Truth is the inevitable outcome of all things.
Peace and strength.
Perfect love and perfect trust.
So mote it be.
MoonlightLullaby · 41-45, F
This is the the true usage of syllabus skills; succinct, while also carrying great internal rhyme. I'm better at critiquing poetry than writing it, and not only is this exquisite free verse, it's sentiments are truly beautiful. ❤
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Aww so beautiful
@Fungirlmmm Nice. I actually went to Tampa and had Cuban sandwiches with VFP and MSP.
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
@puck61 That's cool. I met a lot of folks in real life from EP. It was safer in the early days before they became mainstream.
@Fungirlmmm That was so weird and sad about the murder. I still wonder if that wasn't the reason EP died.
TeresaRudolph71 · 51-55, F
Wow, that's really beautiful. I especially like that last paragraph. I hope it turns out to be true.
This is beautiful! 💖
@Vivaci I really hope I get to see all the people I love when I go! I'm a believer, but oblivion seems fair enough too. It's not like you are going to float around in oblivion thinking to yourself. "Gosh. I sure miss being alive."
@puck61 lol...I think I hold the same idea of death and life as you ...if you remember we spoke on this topic at length a long time back.
@Vivaci I'm somewhat sad to say, I wake up in a new world every morning for the most part these days. Thank you though. Maybe there's something that would spark the memory. Did we just kind of drift away and stop talking, or was it just a circumstantial conversation that stemmed from a thread that we were both on?
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
This is great! I love finding poetry here. Everyone has their own unique nature they add to their writing... and this is great stuff! Well done :)
@CCMorgan Thanks so much. I have to admit. it feels really good to read the positive feedback! I think maybe I should try and get back to writing instead of getting caught up in politics! 😏
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
@puck61 I wholeheartedly agree! You write very well. It would be a gift wasted if you didn't...
Peaches · F
I'd venture to say you've left a bigger impression on people than you realize. ⭐️ Although the tides and waves of SW pull and toss us in their sea of ambiguity...I've never forgotten you.😉 Great post puck.
faith2hope4love · 56-60, F
Beautiful tribute to your friends!!😊
@faith2hope4love Nice cryptic thing! The 1313 club!
faith2hope4love · 56-60, F
Thank you!!😊@puck61 I love that chapter too!!💕
faith2hope4love · 56-60, F
Yes, it does sound cryptic!!😉@puck61
I am an elemental. And I approve of this beauty. Thank you, Puck.
@PoetryNEmotion You're welcome. My soul realm is in turmoil, but I still have my love, and silver. Sometimes those voices in my head aren't mine.
@puck61 I suggest you continue writing. I would love to read more poetry from you.
@PoetryNEmotion I just did a hip shot right after posting this titled "I'd Better". Did you see that one?
SW-User
You're very talented in the writing department! 👍
@SW-User Thanks a lot. I appreciate that!
SW-User
@puck61 :) I seen you in angry mode and you're expression there is impressive, you know language in and out like i wish i did.
@SW-User . Well, I feel like I'm being called back by old friends to join them around the fire and step away from the "angry mode". I'm always carrying a lot more weight than I need to.
SW-User
This is beautiful, are you a pagan?
@SW-User I believe everything but appreciate truth the most. I believe in the old craft in the healing way it was meant to be, but I also believe in Jesus, Buddha, Zoraster, Seth, Enoch, Hammurabi, and 33 million others . I believe in herb lore and quantum physics. I believe in belief and the lost chord!
Zonuss · 41-45, M
Not bad for a Far Right Neo Con ideologue. 🙂

 
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