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I Write Poetry

Immortal

When your hands are on my body
Your vision and attention engrossed in me,
My longing to live forever sparks and elevates.
As your gentle fingers caress me,
I yearn to reorient the terms of nature with mine.
For life to always remain alive,
How else would I get to enjoy you forever?
For us and our loved ones to experience eternally.
Going through mostly highs and some lows
Knowing that no matter what it would not ever get as low as death.
Just time, time to grow and be comfortably in love.

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Goralski51-55, M
What part of d body would d hands b on 馃槓
Pureblossom22-25, F
@Goralski: Now that I read it again I realise it sound quit dirty 馃檲鈽猴笍
I had said body intending it to be just as a general term (any part ex shoulders), but living room for it to be subjective .For the reader to imagine what they want
Goralski51-55, M
@Pureblossom: Hmmmmm i see. ...this one is nice not too dark. ..except d dying part that is 馃槵
Pureblossom22-25, F
@Goralski: thanks 馃槃
artemis22-25, F

 
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