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A poem ....

Alone again, these webs I spin
A task of burden, a task of sin
Caught in myself, resistant to free
Unbreakable bonds, they hold you to me
Strong and weak at the same time
Pliable flesh, eases your mind
Seeking the truth to only find lies
Lies I could see but decided to hide
Back in myself, I retreat to regrow
Reaping this burden that was painfully sown.
masterofyou · 70-79, M
That's pretty good writing and painfully true what you wrote..
wow...powerful
littlematthew123 · 22-25, M
wow thats so nice but hard to understand
SW-User
Wow...
Your writes are so powerful
SteakNchips · 51-55, M
Fantastic
SteakNchips · 51-55, M
496sbc · 36-40, M
[quote] Lies I could see but decided to hide [/quote]
Powerful verse here tbh

I felt that
XcookiexbakerX · 31-35, F
@TheBlackPowerRanger please do, share and express however you please :)
mayguy · 46-50, M
@XcookiexbakerX Your prose is truly exceptional and hopefully you will share more of it soon. :)
mayguy · 46-50, M
@XcookiexbakerX Is it my imagination or did you return here today? Hopefully, that's actually reality. And if so, welcome back! 👏👏👏👏
SW-User
I felt this to my core. You're an amazing poet.
XcookiexbakerX · 31-35, F
@SW-User I write best when I'm deep in that heartache, can't write a happy poem for the life of me. Thank you.
SW-User
@XcookiexbakerX Same. You are welcome.
Excellent poem.
Really well-written.
Montanaman · M
You have struck a cord 😏💞
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