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I Express Myself Through Writing



On the cusp of waking
Sleep still swimming
Muddled between what is
and what is not
She lingered in his mind's eye

Trying to hold on to her
His eyes closed again
Her essence fading
Pushed away

Loneliness drifted in
Like the tidal surge
Washing clean the coast
The sea claiming back its secrets

Eyes opening in the vacant room
The sun's harsh rebuke
He reluctantly arose
Away from her and his aspiration

His heart an empty vessel
An abandoned house echoing the happiness of youth that once dwelled there, but had long since moved away

Stars no longer guided him
The moon no longer lit his path
The world had moved on
The house became a ruin

Crumbling into dust
MayaHope · 41-45, F
An emotive write. From dust and ashes the mighty Phoenix can rise you know. It reminded me a little of a poem I wrote about longing for the light but the comfort of darkness.

There is. Dreamlike sense to this which reminds me almost of ode to a nightingale, ‘Fled is that vision do I wake or sleep?’
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@MayaHope Thanks for commenting. Yes, I've heard that about the Phoenix. 🙂
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Oh my... you ok my sweet friend?
And this is beautiful....
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@SW-User Thanks my friend
SW-User
@SW-User you're welcome darlin *hugs* 🤗

 
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