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I Express Myself Through Writing



The Funhouse


Walking through the mystery
Arms outstretched and eyes closed

Frightened of the unknown
Phantasms behind every corner
Walking on eggshells

Traversing the maze
Multiple doorways to explore
Some by choice
Some by force

Infinite mirrors throughout
Reflecting our images a thousand times

Do you like what you see?
Some close their eyes
Some see a distorted version of their likeness, only to hide their eyes or weep

Many exit early...by choice or fate
Others linger to the end, eager to see what the next doorway will divulge

I feel a hand in the darkness
It closes around mine as a feminine form joins my path
Your touch conveys a kindred trepidation

I have been joined by others
in the maze of mirrors before
My own reflection was the most difficult to face and accept

The mirror reflected my entire soul as it bore into my heart and mind

Shame and ugliness grinned back at me in a snarl

Your lips whisper into my ear as we walk
Words of comfort and hesitence
My grip tightens on yours

The door ahead of us is ominous, yet the only passage not careening back into the reality behind

Voices and ghosts behind us linger closer, threatening to impede forward momentum

Excitement and fear mix together into obscurity

Your grip on mine is kindred and familiar. Your voice caresses my heart with prose that is new and expressive. Seductive.....



We pass through the doorway.....


MayaHope · 41-45, F
I enjoyed the metaphor of life to the sadism of a creepy fun house. I used to always by weery of the fun house as a child. I also once write a horror story when I was younger about some murders at a fun house amongst a group of friends. Sure that’s loaded with loads of metaphor for someone to analyse. No one phoned social care though. My son wrote a similar story about some friends being murdered in a forest. The school were horrified and could not see the psychological catharsis of it. (He had recently changed school and lost all his friends). It had ended with the line and Flick (protagonist) survived and went on to live a great life!

They missed that bit amongst the masked machete wielding murderers who only Flick had managed to fight off!

Anyway I digress, did you find the door out?
SW-User
Nope...not a painting. They are just a couple of pics I liked and downloaded for the story.

It's a good thing the schools have you to sort these things out for them!

I'm not sure if I'll ever find the door out, however, I'm still hopeful. 🤔
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Ps cool picture, is it a distorted photo or painting? I like it
SW-User
@LilPuckBunny Thanks for reading and the compliment. 😊

 
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