I busted a nut almost 2 what a good woman

This is neat and I applaud you for your bravery! It isn't easy for a complete beginner to post their written works on the internet. I've noticed that your sentences are extremely short. This is no problem by itself, but becomes one when you have no other sentence variation, creating a sort stubby rhythm; disjointed and off tempo. Remember, prose fiction needs to flow like water and cascade like the wind.
In example: Daddy had four beers then suddenly decided he wanted a back rub. I started in my usual way of touching and gently kissing his back, occasionally kissing each other's lips in between. I then nuzzled his neck and kissed behind his ear. It wasn't long before he was climbing the walls in anticipation, pushing my hand down his jeans and into his boxers.
Just my 2 cents btw, you can completely disregard if you think it's incorrect.
Good luck! I can see your talent already.

🥵 whoa!

Fuck hot!!

Awesome

So hot, my knickers were soaking x