Thoughts anyone?

@Arorin What about them?

@SW-User people calling depression their demons feels overused to me anymore. The uniqueness of the writing in my opinion is dropped dramatically my the last 3 lines. If I were to have written something similar I would have chose other wording is all.

@Arorin Hmm. Such as? Give me some examples I'm curious :P Probably it's written based on what the person feels/thinks from a more personal viewpoint.

Who even am I?
Each day I have to wonder
Am I even capable to feel?
Am I still human?
Maybe I have acceded to something more.
Maybe I am destined to live life searching.
What am I even searching for?
Lost, torn and forgotten.
The suffering fallen on deff ears.
Just a ghost to the living around me.
Who pulls these strings that torment my broken soul?
Puppet master release me from this black hole.

@SW-User it's just my view point the word demons is over used is all lol.

@Arorin Wow that was awesome and deep thanks for sharing 😊

@SW-User you are welcome that is just an example btw like you asked for i didnt spend much time on it as it was on the fly!

@Arorin Haha indeed that was pretty fast =) I should get back to writing sometimes. I just feel de motivated more often than not though :/

@SW-User I use to write a lot but I started feeling like it I silly for humans to be attached to word written in a way that could be viewed as profound. at the end of the day is there really meaning in it? Depression comes and goes but was I really being tourchered as much as I felt? Despite a day I might feel depressed or lost looking from the outside my life is pretty good. I'm not in danger, I'm not sick, my basic human needs are mostly met. The darkness I often feel inside me really is a silly thing when there are people in the world having to dodge bombs each day and watch their loved ones killed in front of them. My writing needs to evolve so it isnt about me but about the injustice others have to endure before I write again.

@Arorin I haven't written in ages either for myself but I plan on starting again very soon. When I'm in a dull mood I sketch or write when in a better mood Im out discovering and learning new things. You have talent though so why let go of it? One of my biggest mistakes was giving up on work I wrote that took me ages to write. I accidentally lost them in an unthinkable moment. Guess I had to learn the hard way too.

@SW-User I suppose it it was after my last deployment I became really distant and haven't been able to heal. I can't relate to humanity anymore at least not at this time.

@Arorin I'm sorry about that. If you would ever like to come and talk and share experiences my doors open for you =)