I Like To Write Poetry

I need help completing this line, any suggestions would be much appreciated!

Lost in her eyes
That winsome gaze
Fuels my desire
Her (blank) that I crave

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Mamapolo2016 · F

For her soul that I crave.
It's her mind that I crave. (Not very plausible but it scans.)
Playing off 'Lost in her eyes' ... it's her guidance I crave.

NewKidInTown · 51-55, M

@Mamapolo2016 I like "soul"
Guidance feels like it takes it in a mentor direction, which is a different track from the "desire" in the previous line.
Thanks for replying : )

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