I Love Poems

Life

Ice to the touch, but warm inside
It'll make you shiver and shudder, but make you feel warm and cosy
Dark and twisted is it's game, but brightly colored and tame
Alone and unwanted, but loved and surrounded
This is what life can feel
like sometimes.

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Kazuya69 · 31-35, M

original poem?

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LittleMissB95

@Kazuya69 Why would I be offended by that? And thanks I'm glad you enjoy it

Kazuya69 · 31-35, M

@LittleMissB95 Many people dont like their work being compared to someone elses. That was why i was worried. I saw you were from aus also tho and just found it an interesting coincidence.

met her on a vampire site lol lost touch years ago.

and i did enjoy, made me go read some others you posted, if you ever want to read some of mine id be willing to share in pm. idk how id feel about posting my crappy work tho..

LittleMissB95

Thanks that's nice of you to say and yeah if you want to message me your work I'd love to read it and yeah I suppose you have a point but I don't mind

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