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Dream (a poem)

Calmly stare across the sky
The clouds are floating right on by
Feel the movement of the breeze
Hear the rustle of many trees.
Smell the flower scented air
Thoughts are floating everywhere
Thoughts cascading, pushed by wind
Soon to be lost around the bend
See the way the clouds roll by
catching dreams that wouldn't die
Dream of things you wish to do
When reality is your dreams come true

Breezey

It's not perfect and I don't wish it to be. Just something I wrote a long time ago. :)
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valobasa4ever · F Best Comment
Like your way of expression .
Thank You.

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@valobasa4ever Awww... thank YOU! :)
@SW-User 🍁

Darkskiescoming · 51-55, M
That was very nice. You have talent.
Darkskiescoming · 51-55, M
@SW-User you're welcome. Just write from your heart, that is perfect.
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@Darkskiescoming I'll try not to bore anyone here. lol
Darkskiescoming · 51-55, M
@SW-User you won't have that issue.
SW-User
That is cheerful, and a nice thought to start the morning with.
SW-User
@SW-User I'm glad you think so. Thank you. :)
Indy74 · 46-50, F
This is absolutely beautiful! 🌟
Montanaman · M
I'd be pleased with it. 👍🤗✍🍷
Montanaman · M
@SW-User Smiles 😃😊✍
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@Montanaman You have quite a way with words.
Montanaman · M
@SW-User thank you 😊🤗
Beatbox34 · 31-35, M
Thank you for sharing it.

Poems need not be perfect as long as they are artistic enough to convey the message.
Beatbox34 · 31-35, M
@SW-User Yes you did 🙂
SW-User
@Beatbox34 Good! :) I am off to sleep and dream. Goodnight. :)
Beatbox34 · 31-35, M
@SW-User Good night. Sleep tight and sweet dreams 🙂
Lostpoet · M
I love how this poem makes me feel like the objects you describe while i read it.
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Lovely 😊. I found it relaxing
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@questionWeaver Thank you. I believe dreams don't have to stay dreams. :)
LunarOrbit · 56-60, M
Very nice. 👍
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@LunarOrbit Thank you :)
SW-User
@eyeno 😎
Bang5luts · M
I loved it. Not everything is complex in its natural state.
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@Bang5luts Thank you. 😎
Bang5luts · M
@SW-User absolutely. Thank you for sharing
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