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Is this sentence to wordy/long? Does it make sense? How can I make it better?

in a speedy zipp, they both sprang out almost instantly, as if they had been apart of a marathon of some sorts.
Rutterman · 46-50, M
Looks fine, except I think you mean "a part" rather than "apart". Also, it might be better to say "sort", rather than "sorts".
Cooper802Forever · 22-25, M
@Rutterman thanks for help, I appreciate it. 😁
Rutterman · 46-50, M
@Cooper802Forever You're very welcome.

 
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